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Old 09-24-2017, 10:24 AM   #1
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Stellar Nursery

October 25th 2016
Long range sensors detect
a shooting spark from the dark regions of space

7am August 2nd 2017
Oceanside Laboratories

When a spectrum of light had filled my eyes
the newly formed nebula showed a sign
of a birthing star
as we gazed through the haze
of this panoramic telescope

Pulsing and glowing
pushing and moaning
the elliptical dance had begun

8am
Expansive gas and dust
with galactic crush
a cosmic crown
as the edges round
outwards

Constellation contractions
planetary action
fire from a billion dragons

8:34am
The wait is no more
a elegant star in view
made from me and you
she shines so very bright
unlike any other sight
ever to bestow our eyes
moon gazer

From dark matter
emotions scatter
an expanding heart
for now I know my part
in this magical mystery called life
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Old 09-25-2017, 07:07 PM   #2
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I love this.
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Old 09-25-2017, 07:38 PM   #3
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Beautiful, Mike.

Congrats again.
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Old 09-26-2017, 03:05 AM   #4
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very nice
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Old 09-27-2017, 08:49 AM   #5
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Thanks bros!


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Beautiful, Mike.

Congrats again.
Thanks JAG. What a joy my little star is :)
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