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Old 07-22-2007, 12:38 PM   #1
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asshole

i can't control my words
where have i heard this before?
i keep repeating myself
and now the syllabels are sore
and it puts me through
these secrets we tell...
and i can't get no help

and now you walk away

and it happens everyday
the little games we play
and now i gotta pay
for the things that i say
and bow they betray me
once again

and it's not an arguement
and no that's not what I meant
the message that's sent
is not so clear

but after logic is lent
i am taking the hint
now its time to get bent

and fade away...
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Old 07-23-2007, 01:39 PM   #2
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Re: asshole

seriously... some feedback
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