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Old 07-21-2007, 05:40 AM   #1
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Enough

Ive had enough of it
I thirst for something new.
Enough to make me want to die
Enough to make me spew.
These lethargic tired eyes
Who wish to be no more
Again and again
Are greeted by these
Oh so too familiar walls

Those same old words
Plastered over the same certain
Stagnant thoughts and opinions
Hidden
You can see their shape
Among the ripples in the curtain.

Caught up in the story
Always in demand
Theres nothing like a story
To make the world seem bland
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Old 07-21-2007, 05:41 AM   #2
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Re: Enough

I made this up on the spot, so the rythem is a bit fucked and it dosent flow with last stanza. but i still like it.
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Old 07-21-2007, 09:43 PM   #3
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Re: Enough

I am not a poet and know very little about poetry. [/qualifier]

I like this though... I feel like I can relate to it.
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