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07-16-2007, 10:47 AM
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Level 8 - Vociferous
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: The Microcosm
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Kabbalah
Based on an INTENSE dream I had last night:
Down the stairs and into the chamber
Dark and dingy a candle lights the painting
The crucifixion in all its splendor
Yet merely a picture
As I turn 180 my eyes are opened
To the inversion of the pictures depiction
This is the mirror image reflection
Showing where our roots truly reside
I then see the skull on the wall
And with the key now in my hand
I tumble the lock within its jaw
The flame spirals from the now opened door
Showing me the path towards natures law
Last edited by Akasha; 07-16-2007 at 12:02 PM..
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07-16-2007, 10:52 AM
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Level 8 - Vociferous
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: The Microcosm
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Re: Kabbalah
my first ever attempt at poetry btw...
Last edited by Akasha; 07-16-2007 at 12:00 PM..
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07-20-2007, 10:01 AM
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Level 8 - Vociferous
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Location: The Microcosm
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Re: Kabbalah
its not that bad is it? lol
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07-20-2007, 07:13 PM
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Level 9 - Obstreperous
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Wellington
Posts: 1,910
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Re: Kabbalah
No its not all that bad, you need to add some of you in with those descriptions though. its not the white dress that matters, but the feeling.
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