Well, i thaught id post this little diddy, its something ive been working on for some time off and on. Its not all done yet, this is only the first half, so comment please.

http://static.zed.cbc.ca/users/r/Rui...Hat_face52.mp3

dude, that is eerie as shit, I love it. everything is just so raw, I like the little bass breakdown as well, many layers. I think this is very well composed, everything fits perfect. nice job.

Interesting ... I don't like the tone of it, but it's got some neat ideas in it. Really deathmetally.

Are you singing?

Whoa, that transition hits you really hard. I like it.

really noisy, but in a beautiful way. Really heavy distortion, or what?

What are the words?

I certainly am singing. and i will not at this point in time write the lyrics.
and also thank you for the comments thus far.

deviatedwolf625: can you explain about the tone? what is it about it?

I mean, it's very very raw, angry, to the point of violence IMHO. Has some comparison to opeth in my mind (except with higher pitched vocals).

Power to ya, you're doing better than me

oooh, i thaught you meant the tone of my instruments.
I agree it is a very angry song.

What does it take to get some more feedback around here...

Wow, that's quite amazing. I really love the vocals.

What program did you use?

kinda NIN-esque. in a good way. I like the effect on the voice. But maybe too much of the wabbly effect. (wah?), at least at first, but i guess the verse, it's good.

Okay, finished listening to it.

Sounds good, i like it. And seeing as it's only the first half, then i can't say anything about it kinda being stagnant. It starts with the intro, heavy distorted stuff, quieter, heavy distorted stuff, quieter, etc. But i'm really anticipating the final product. But take your time. What you have is good.

Just curious, what were some of your inspirations for the piece?

For the programs I use: I use fruityloops for the orchestration and than render that to a file, and load it into cool edit to add vocals and bass or any other multitracking and effects/eq-ing that needs to be done.

as for the vocal effect its a compressor running into a flange going at around 50khz with harsh distortion, than being filtered cutting out most of the low end and than some nice reverb.

inspiration, the lyrics were written about a year or two ago, they weren't written to be as angry as they sound but it jsut turned out that way. I'm getting stressed out with school and people and fairly angry sometimes, so I just need to let it out.

OK Just listening now

Thats extreme. Damn good too-flows nicely.

The sounds are all pretty cool and they all work well together

Good work: look forward to hearing the finished version

Why is it that your little diddies always completely kick the shit out of what I'd consider a masterpiece? Great work, yet again... damn good vocals too, bordering on evil.

Here's to me thinking I could stop posting here.

I don't like that kind of music
Very evil, heavy . . . reminds me of :wumpscut: more than Opeth.
The end is fucking briliant though, the last part of the song seems so much more emotional than the rest.

i like the music a lot. very awesome. the flange in the beginning on the vocals is a bit much but it's a fucking awesome song... it really does sound almost sinister

well, thanks all for the comments, im close to finishing this version and have a bunch of remixes of this comming too, i plan on releasing a cd of this song and its remixes as a sort of segway to y next album...