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Old 12-11-2013, 04:51 AM   #1
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A wave and a nod
a wave and a nod
How you doing?
Good! You?


Happy guys fly past my eyes
every day whistlin',
every day back-slappin'.
How bout this?
How bout that?
How bout the crisp moon
that hangs in the Winter
sky and those stars
that simmer like sparks
from its white-hot burning?

Hey Bill, check this out:
Winter is the great equalizer,
Nature's bringin' it down to zero
and everyone's gonna shake
in awe! We're gonna shiver
and shake and walk rigidly
in our tight goose-bumped hides—
everything that hangs
from us is turning red and cold.

Am I the only one that loves
this? It's so cold it burns
my warm, moist lungs. Winter's
trying to get in there to freeze
them too and I wouldn't
mind so much if it did.

A wave and a nod
a wave and a nod
Howdy!
Howdy!


Good men, the family men—
hittin' the floor hard at church
and in the community; slingin'
basketballs and footballs
and baseballs at everyone
and they all seem to catch'em.
They sleep warm and heavy
under Night's banner:
stars moon fog
the whole thing
a cosmic play
while they sleep in their seat.

That's fine, that's fine.
I'll stay awake
dry-eyed and pained—
the only one in this
theater.
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Old 12-11-2013, 07:25 AM   #2
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Our warm blood enjoys the competition,
pumping it's heat to the tips of our toes
steaming our warm skin against the crisp and cold nature.

A cosmic play. I like this Reign
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