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Old 08-02-2009, 02:38 PM   #1
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The Free Collapse

Empowered between this world and the next,
And without a junction of super-beings,
Those burning and those sane,
I remembered one truth; death has a bane.

To meet in the shadows, and then finding my true way home,
I stopped to reflect and as I did,
The thunder and chaos stormed down from the sky,
And these aliens, albeit intimidating, started to pry.

I appeared vague, I screamed with vigor,
My heart stretching forth its hands into the void,
I tried so hard to keep the serious things serious,
I tried so hard to make this broken world vast.

I am the torch in the dark,
The breath from below shows me this pit,
A vat of mud and mist, I could not swim in this shit,
Please, oh please, come down here. Save me.

And as Jesus cries, I look up to the open blue,
Not a cloud or spec of water to fog my view,
And I see in the distance magestic things begin to fall,
I see the world around me begin to Collapse.

And for a moments time, I feel some sort of happiness.
And then all my thoughts turn back to regret.
And I see in the distance, MAGESTIC THINGS BEGIN TO FALL.
Welcome, my friend; this is the Free Collapse.
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Old 08-02-2009, 02:38 PM   #2
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Re: The Free Collapse

Please, post comments, criticism, ideas, thoughts, etc.

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Old 08-04-2009, 08:19 AM   #3
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Re: The Free Collapse

talking about aliens and jesus in the same peice kinda threw me :) But I def like it overall!
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