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Old 07-14-2009, 10:41 PM   #1
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benevolent far

There was a sea forming from within this benevolent far, a knowing that extends beyond all of our wealth, and it occurred to me as I lay still, but attempting to walk, that all instances hence forth will be scattered about in such a manner for all of us to enjoy. And this is only humorous if looked at from a perspective that is totally nihilistic, and to an extent, slightly pessimistic, but enough to resonate in the hearts of a mass; a collective so intense, that when stretched can link even the endless texts that have yet to be found. And for this very exact moment, I salute you and your everyday ways. The pile of waste that I have attempted to sync up with the plate of lead in my head has all blown away. Lost amongst all of the glimpses that I once thought lasted for so much longer. And sometimes they did. But only when accompanied by a stare.

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Old 07-16-2009, 10:14 AM   #2
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Re: benevolent far

wow. that's all i can say about this. wow.
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