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Old 12-05-2013, 06:44 PM   #1
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Cliché Milkshake

Who?
you slipped on spilled milk
tripped guilt
split open from the top on down
now you got shit for a crown
mutter your existence for a second
do you hear that?

Shhh
finger to your lips
not sensual
visual motion
causing commotion
all up in this
hold tight

Might you get up?
erect to society
and wrecked in humanity
cause and dialect
is so perfect
smile

Dial in bitch
and switch hit
like a major leaguer
balling down the hall
and swallowing it whole
boy
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Old 12-06-2013, 05:53 AM   #2
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Re: Cliché Milkshake

nice flow lotus, always glad when you post
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Old 12-08-2013, 06:23 AM   #3
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Re: Cliché Milkshake

lotus do you got a computer mic?
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Old 12-08-2013, 01:44 PM   #4
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Re: Cliché Milkshake

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lotus do you got a computer mic?
Yes.

As a matter of fact I have two turntables and a microphone.
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Old 12-08-2013, 03:14 PM   #5
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Re: Cliché Milkshake

you should do a song of this
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Old 12-08-2013, 03:28 PM   #6
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Re: Cliché Milkshake

It was written as a rap (battle)
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Old 12-08-2013, 03:29 PM   #7
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you should do a song of this
Maybe I will...
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