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Old 08-03-2009, 08:39 PM   #1
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last transmission

is this some elaborate joke (i hope), the world we now shall live in.
doomed to suffer under the "new" (not really) political creed that stinks of blood, sweat and bills.
forced to work like dogs in shifts of labor violently upheld.
upheld by an iron fist so eloquently wrought.
freedoms stripped away and just as quickly "forgotten" yet quietly remembered
"pretentiousness and non-PC values" crucified upon a subtly blunted sword.
this is known yet ignored, and fought with such a tired, blank-faced stare.
what is it that compels us to reprimand those principles that teach the importance of moderation?
will this ever end or i do need to force the molotovs into their fucking hands myself?
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Old 08-03-2009, 08:59 PM   #2
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Re: last transmission

I liked this, especially the uneven internal rhymes in places
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