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Old 06-12-2008, 10:12 PM   #1
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Thy Immaculate River

Thy Immaculate River

And if asked about discovering God,
I will tell them all that I have!
For I have been to thy forested wood
where her trees, like Angels, shelter thee;
and whose denizens paradigm the very welcoming
of the lord himself.

And if asked of Eternal Paradise,
I will tell them that I have been there!
For I have been to thy summertime fields
where the Sun, like a Cherub, smiles upon thee;
and whose lilacs instill the very smell and warmth
of heaven itself.

And if asked about Holy Communion,
I will tell them that I have been there!
For I have been to thy placid river
where the birds, Like the Muses, sing unto thee;
and whose babbling currents magnify the venerable chant
of mass itself.

And if asked of being devout,
I will tell them that I am.
For I have been to
thy Sanctified Wood;
thy Consecrated Field;
and thy Immaculate River!
Peoria Illinois 6/20/07
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Old 06-13-2008, 07:41 AM   #2
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