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Old 12-22-2002, 07:45 PM   #1
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I wish a was a songwritter

My eyes are open, in a new way
Never before i´ve felt such change
One simple look back, and i see you close your eyes
Farewell, then, cant blame me for trying
Walking
Flying
Crawling
Im finding a way through it all
And into revelation
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Old 12-23-2002, 02:19 PM   #2
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I wish I was a reviewer

Cool.

I've kind of been there.
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Old 12-23-2002, 03:11 PM   #3
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I really wish..

Arc

So we meet again
Under a courtain of lightnings
Its funyy how the storm up there
Echoes with our screams down here

You dont understand me i know
But would you believe
Not even i can understand my own self
I guess not
Cause, why are you turning away?

I wish there was a way
Being without you
Just brings me pain
So i prefer to go upstairs
Excuse me while i dance the lightning
Its dance cant hurt me like you

And in my worts hour
I embrace the storm
And i feel the flash
While energy traspasses me
I only remember such moment of greatness
And now i find it out
I reach to you
See this energy
This ecstasys coming through
Well this is exactly what i fell
When i merely lay my eyes over you
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