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Old 03-16-2003, 02:23 PM   #1
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Ode to Consumerism

Drinking alcoholic Koolaide
While writting poetry in Crayon
Can you remember the time
I stole your bic and
Chased the Quick rabbit
Out into the tire-swing orchard
Of polyvinyl bliss and polystyrene heaven
A cherbic cacophony of mass communication
A cellphone superhighway utopia.
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Old 03-19-2003, 02:17 PM   #2
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nicenicenice, i really like this.
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