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09-27-2006, 03:04 PM
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This is some of my work posted on mypsace.com. I am in the process of putting together a band that is capable of playing this music with heavy electric/distorted guitar as oppose to acoustic guitar, and with a percussion section. What do you think?

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Old 09-27-2006, 03:04 PM   #1
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This is some of my work posted on mypsace.com. I am in the process of putting together a band that is capable of playing this music with heavy electric/distorted guitar as oppose to acoustic guitar, and with a percussion section. What do you think?

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I think you couldn't sound more like Tool if you actually were Tool.
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I think you couldn't sound more like Tool if you actually were Tool.
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Damn...you have a great voice.

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Damn...you have a great voice.

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10-02-2006, 01:20 PM
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Pretty jammin tunes. Find someone with a good sense of time and rythm with some hand percussion and jam out.

Edit: In Radiance, at about 3:50ish to 4:10, with the repeated guitar progression, I thought that could use a vocal climax.

Another thing, in reference to Radiance, the falsetto part needs more control. It's mixed too loud, and the dynamics are just okay. Maybe a female vocalist would pwn that part. Either that, or bring Jeff Buckley back from the dead.
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Pretty jammin tunes. Find someone with a good sense of time and rythm with some hand percussion and jam out.

Edit: In Radiance, at about 3:50ish to 4:10, with the repeated guitar progression, I thought that could use a vocal climax.

Another thing, in reference to Radiance, the falsetto part needs more control. It's mixed too loud, and the dynamics are just okay. Maybe a female vocalist would pwn that part. Either that, or bring Jeff Buckley back from the dead.
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