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10-18-2006, 03:14 AM
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Level 1 - Lurker
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Mountain Top
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i never write poetry, here's a 3 line poem i just made, critque for me?
for within.
searching for purpose
aligned with misfits
lost in confusion
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10-18-2006, 06:27 AM
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Banned.
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Swimming towards rocky shores
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Re: i never write poetry, here's a 3 line poem i just made, critque for me?
a truism, through and through. it captures it, though, especially with its brevity.
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10-18-2006, 07:43 AM
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Level 7 - Loquacious
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: California
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Re: i never write poetry, here's a 3 line poem i just made, critque for me?
Very simple, yet meaningful. Nice.
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10-18-2006, 03:40 PM
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Level 1 - Lurker
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Re: i never write poetry, here's a 3 line poem i just made, critque for me?
thx
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