The Tool Page: Opinion - continue the poem

05-29-2007, 08:32 PM	#1
LabRat404 swept underneath my skin Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: asd Posts: 3,304 Bincount™: 1097	continue the poem injuries we've endured scars we've grown into __________________ Lead Programmer, http://EdgeOfChaos.planetdoom.gamespy.com Artist, http://caibbor.deviantart.com
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05-29-2007, 08:45 PM	#2
dcastillo On Probation Join Date: May 2006 Location: Corpus Christi, TX, Earth Posts: 5,435 Bincount™: 5981	Re: continue the poem The pain unmourned has Become the pews my knees are bent to
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05-29-2007, 10:52 PM	#3
~~jevons~~ Banned. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: you'll never take me alive Posts: 2,276 Bincount™: 779	Re: continue the poem someone whose shoes were never fit to hold soles
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05-30-2007, 07:02 AM	#4
LabRat404 swept underneath my skin Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: asd Posts: 3,304 Bincount™: 1097	Re: continue the poem these thoughts ache to be forgotten __________________ Lead Programmer, http://EdgeOfChaos.planetdoom.gamespy.com Artist, http://caibbor.deviantart.com
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05-30-2007, 08:55 AM	#5
~~jevons~~ Banned. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: you'll never take me alive Posts: 2,276 Bincount™: 779	Re: continue the poem living in lost and found bins getting caught on their sallow edges
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05-30-2007, 09:59 AM	#6
parables in the world Level 8 - Vociferous Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: NM...beside turtle mountain Posts: 678 Bincount™: 14	Re: continue the poem Torn, now drifts through the darkened abyss __________________ I live to share what i see around this world. Not believing in things won't make it happen because you don't believe it will. Peace is a physical and spiritual balance.
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05-30-2007, 10:33 AM	#7
lotus. Up From The Skies Suicide Booth ID: 13 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Stardust Posts: 13,137 Bincount™: 26323	Re: continue the poem revolving into the nebula of inner consciousness __________________ I don't know where the sunbeams end And the starlights begin It's all a mystery
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05-30-2007, 10:37 AM	#8
~~jevons~~ Banned. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: you'll never take me alive Posts: 2,276 Bincount™: 779	Re: continue the poem swift, resonant and thoughtless, tossing tin cans to the tangents
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05-30-2007, 03:04 PM	#9
dcastillo On Probation Join Date: May 2006 Location: Corpus Christi, TX, Earth Posts: 5,435 Bincount™: 5981	Re: continue the poem A myriad of madness Tangled with some kind of infinite sadness
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05-30-2007, 05:09 PM	#10
Pharmaecopia_stinkfist Level 7 - Loquacious Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 225 Bincount™: 3	Re: continue the poem The haunting blue of the moon Provokes my inner platypus __________________ It's too bad stupidity isn't painful
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05-30-2007, 07:31 PM	#11
parables in the world Level 8 - Vociferous Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: NM...beside turtle mountain Posts: 678 Bincount™: 14	Re: continue the poem all the dreams that speak to me reveal my reality. __________________ I live to share what i see around this world. Not believing in things won't make it happen because you don't believe it will. Peace is a physical and spiritual balance.
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05-30-2007, 07:45 PM	#12
Ignoring Ignorance Level 9 - Obstreperous Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Wellington Posts: 1,910 Bincount™: 94	Re: continue the poem And you swear at the man with the small rubber bands. They dont hurt much, but now theres a pile.
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05-30-2007, 07:45 PM	#13
~~OuRsOuLsInMoTiOn~~ Banned. Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Land Downunder Posts: 812 Bincount™: 4103	Re: continue the poem Through day, into night where insanity rests
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05-30-2007, 08:09 PM	#14
Ignoring Ignorance Level 9 - Obstreperous Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Wellington Posts: 1,910 Bincount™: 94	Re: continue the poem I find all the pieces Of quiet Ive lost or left behind Strewn and discarded in the back Of my loft, and my mind.
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05-30-2007, 11:36 PM	#15
~~jevons~~ Banned. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: you'll never take me alive Posts: 2,276 Bincount™: 779	Re: continue the poem I killed a man,
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05-31-2007, 12:26 AM	#16
Ignoring Ignorance Level 9 - Obstreperous Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Wellington Posts: 1,910 Bincount™: 94	Re: continue the poem and found he was no longer blind.
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05-31-2007, 05:06 PM	#17
pekkerwood Level 2 - Poster Join Date: May 2007 Location: dallas texas Posts: 7 Bincount™: 0	Re: continue the poem it seems to me things arent what they seem to be
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05-31-2007, 06:51 PM	#18
~~talibad~~ Banned. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: 41 degrees 23'57"42" N by 75 degrees 42'38.51" W elevation 822 Posts: 1,790 Bincount™: 93	Re: continue the poem we are the ghost's whom eat the fruit or so the reflections say
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05-31-2007, 08:59 PM	#19
lotus. Up From The Skies Suicide Booth ID: 13 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Stardust Posts: 13,137 Bincount™: 26323	Re: continue the poem the vibration of the train it quickens randomly projecting useless information absorb the chain __________________ I don't know where the sunbeams end And the starlights begin It's all a mystery
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06-01-2007, 06:20 AM	#20
~~jevons~~ Banned. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: you'll never take me alive Posts: 2,276 Bincount™: 779	Re: continue the poem of events, swallow it. Let it cut your hands to pieces,
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06-01-2007, 07:20 AM	#21
~~talibad~~ Banned. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: 41 degrees 23'57"42" N by 75 degrees 42'38.51" W elevation 822 Posts: 1,790 Bincount™: 93	Re: continue the poem bleeding distained and deviate a distant reminder of things decayed find now the moment..
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06-01-2007, 08:19 AM	#22
~~Freemena~~ Banned. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In crazy times Posts: 1,731 Bincount™: 8223	Re: continue the poem Inspiration in happenstance, a glance, a soft motion, a gleem in the eye Drawing out the morning dew with smooth elegance
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06-01-2007, 10:55 AM	#23
biff0016 don't knock it 'til u try it Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: midwest Posts: 1,737 Bincount™: 3430	Re: continue the poem ride the dew drops back into the atmosphere, i've loved and i've lost but never from here. __________________ rip Chad McDaniel (USAC) rip Scott Kalitta (NHRA) rip Henry Surtees (F2) rip Neal Parker (NHRA)
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06-01-2007, 08:20 PM	#24
SDDJS Registered User Join Date: May 2007 Location: VEGA Posts: 30 Bincount™: 0	Re: continue the poem ....... Last edited by SDDJS; 06-02-2007 at 05:45 PM..
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06-02-2007, 08:00 AM	#25
Ignoring Ignorance Level 9 - Obstreperous Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Wellington Posts: 1,910 Bincount™: 94	Re: continue the poem YOure ment to continue from biff fucker.
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06-02-2007, 08:11 AM	#26
~~OuRsOuLsInMoTiOn~~ Banned. Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Land Downunder Posts: 812 Bincount™: 4103	Re: continue the poem haha.... TOLD!
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06-02-2007, 09:57 AM	#27
~~talibad~~ Banned. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: 41 degrees 23'57"42" N by 75 degrees 42'38.51" W elevation 822 Posts: 1,790 Bincount™: 93	Re: continue the poem inspire inspiration
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06-02-2007, 10:09 AM	#28
~~jevons~~ Banned. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: you'll never take me alive Posts: 2,276 Bincount™: 779	Re: continue the poem Talibad makes cryptic statements
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06-02-2007, 05:34 PM

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Re: continue the poem

Quote:

Originally Posted by talibad

inspire inspiration

ha.

(Now I too make cryptic statements.)

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Your fucking hero.

"They fought and they clawed like savages. At the end none had found what they were looking for; and they simply returned to nothing, like they were before."

First degree knows good shit when he sees it. - Ignoring Ignorance

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06-02-2007, 06:07 PM

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Re: continue the poem

Quote:

Originally Posted by biff0016

ride the dew drops back into the atmosphere,
i've loved and i've lost but never from here.

But soon I'll begin to breathe it all in
I only wish
I could say "it won't end"

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06-02-2007, 06:25 PM	#31
FirstDegree Level 7 - Loquacious Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lets go smoke some pot Posts: 334 Bincount™: 381	Re: continue the poem Im being that lonely palm in the desert oasis again, the soft-whispering balance still taken for granted; everything Ive ever needed, provided: soil to bury Myself in view of the setting sun. __________________ Your fucking hero. "They fought and they clawed like savages. At the end none had found what they were looking for; and they simply returned to nothing, like they were before." First degree knows good shit when he sees it. - Ignoring Ignorance
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06-03-2007, 07:26 AM	#32
~~jevons~~ Banned. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: you'll never take me alive Posts: 2,276 Bincount™: 779	Re: continue the poem It sets. Murdered by time, and in due buried by its swift minions, those silent, eternal ampsters. So, in a way, i admit to there being no end-- since i know they, like the rest, are liars.
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06-03-2007, 10:43 AM	#33
~~Freemena~~ Banned. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In crazy times Posts: 1,731 Bincount™: 8223	Re: continue the poem They lie to thier own hearts swiftly beating corruptors believing in thier own sincerity night after night
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06-03-2007, 02:33 PM

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Re: continue the poem

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pharmaecopia_stinkfist

The haunting blue of the moon
Provokes my inner platypus

lol

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06-03-2007, 03:52 PM	#35
~~talibad~~ Banned. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: 41 degrees 23'57"42" N by 75 degrees 42'38.51" W elevation 822 Posts: 1,790 Bincount™: 93	Re: continue the poem im just continueing the damn poem whats so fucking cryptic jesus
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06-03-2007, 04:09 PM	#36
~~jevons~~ Banned. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: you'll never take me alive Posts: 2,276 Bincount™: 779	Re: continue the poem illiterate
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06-03-2007, 04:34 PM	#37
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06-03-2007, 06:42 PM	#38
One Dark Flame Formerly Tool Aenema11 Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: I flee to Decemberunderground Posts: 1,268 Bincount™: 362	Re: continue the poem we suffer needlessly, only to later find we've never suffered at all __________________ "DECEMBERUNDERGROUND is a time and a place. It is where the cold can huddle together in darkness and isolation. It is a community of those detached and disillusioned who flee to love, like winter, in the recesses below the rest of the world." -DXH
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06-03-2007, 07:39 PM	#39
etc43 Level 7 - Loquacious Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Springfield, Virginia Posts: 253 Bincount™: 2	Re: continue the poem ...Fret for your figure? __________________ Talent Sold Separately
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06-03-2007, 08:38 PM	#40
One Dark Flame Formerly Tool Aenema11 Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: I flee to Decemberunderground Posts: 1,268 Bincount™: 362	Re: continue the poem ....Who would have figured that all they'd ever worry about is their figure... __________________ "DECEMBERUNDERGROUND is a time and a place. It is where the cold can huddle together in darkness and isolation. It is a community of those detached and disillusioned who flee to love, like winter, in the recesses below the rest of the world." -DXH Last edited by One Dark Flame; 06-03-2007 at 08:51 PM..
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