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Old 04-18-2005, 07:11 PM   #1
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"Armies of The Jesus" (New Jerusalem)

A courageous spiritual force surges,
through Yahweh's breath love converges

Angels fly so High
Ergo I'd like to resign,
But God's design
Defies time that collides.

Asunder not my soul; but by thunder,
Does toiling roll, my Savior's
Righteous plunder so,
Engaged we are in war to grow.

Reside in lust's nothingness dragon!
I'll descend not toppling,
Or resign from God's army jostling,
Until the given sign depicts the Divine.
Abysmal Devil; be disheveled
In Hell; be severed from us forever.

So Father; with your Paladin Cherubim,
On your Mountain Path Hymn,
Strike your thunderous gong;
Guide me on with Heaven's Battle Song
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Old 04-18-2005, 07:12 PM   #2
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Re: "Armies of The Jesus" (New Jerusalem)

A colliding thunder calm;
like waving palm branches
in wake of Christ's
new materialized
psalm,
grins wide,
like an omnipresent sea tide.
Colliding journies will calm,
like waving oak branches
in wake of God's missions
completed in psalm.
A love reward
will, for us come,
after the sword
plunge melody's rung.

Patience will grace love's need,
when Yahweh's abounding reed,
again sparks our passion seed.
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Old 05-04-2005, 08:42 PM   #3
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Re: "Armies of The Jesus" (New Jerusalem)

does anyone have an opinion of my hymns?
Any atheists want to confound me?
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Old 05-05-2005, 04:27 AM   #4
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Re: "Armies of The Jesus" (New Jerusalem)

It's pretty good. I like it. I'm not an atheist though.
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Old 05-05-2005, 11:38 AM   #5
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Re: "Armies of The Jesus" (New Jerusalem)

It is not wrong to question god. It is wrong to question those who question god.
It is not wrong to question those who love god.
etc!
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Old 05-09-2005, 07:11 PM   #6
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Re: "Armies of The Jesus" (New Jerusalem)

true, unless the person that is questioning the person that questions God, also questions God. This love grows through questioning and searching, but he is always there.
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