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Old 10-27-2016, 03:35 AM   #1
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Bi-Polar

The darkest day

Amphetamines have my heart racing
The faceless investors are at my mercy
I pocket the cash and place the jewels in my vault
My every want waits ready on silver platter
I kiss my wife on the lips and say goodbye
I fuck every woman that captures my attention
They perform fellatio for me to cum again
My buckling knees are addicts in relapse
Outside of me there’s only apathy
My mind obsessed with the ecstatic heights
Chasing blindly ‘till the blood is spilt
‘Till the victim stares back in silence

The brightest night

Guilt hangs heavy upon my every act
The world ignores every apologetic gesture
No treasure or begging will bring me the reward
Walking helplessly across a barren desert
Eden’s voice calls from the mirage
Reawakening me to a lost love
The oasis instantly haunting the ever-present
My trembling hands roll the dice with death
Inside of me there’s only empathy
My body driven to the point of exhaustion
Fasting faithfully ‘till the fangs pierce the skin
‘Till the poison’s rushing to my heart

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Old 10-27-2016, 03:38 AM   #2
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Re: Bi-Polar

This is one i worked for a while, hope you like
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Old 10-31-2016, 01:04 PM   #3
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Re: Bi-Polar

Yes. I liked it.
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