infinitee

Just a very rough draft


It’s the transition of the sun,
The revolution of this charged stone.

Jupiter’s in league with the moon,
All aligned,
Not a moment too soon.

It’s the new fragrance of air,
Clean and crisp and chilled and new.
The stars we used to see,
They’re gone for the year.

It’s the coming of autumnal freedom,
When all else dies,
I sprout anew.

I felt it for an instant,
Fleeting like the moonrise.
I felt it for a moment,
Lingering like low tide.

I feel it in the sun,
Feel it in the moon,
I feel this indigo instant.

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Kruppo

For some reason, this reminds me of a Rosetta song. Maybe it's the way it's paced, I don't know. It's got a cool vibe to it; that can't be denied...very nice.

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infinitee

Rosetta? I've not heard of them

Thanks, Kruppo. I was sort of skeptical about it at first, and still am to a degree, but I think another run-through will make it better

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"You are, and shall be, set in obsidian obelisk.
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Kruppo

You're welcome. You don't have to listen to Rosetta, but look up their lyrics for the album The Galilean Satellites, and you'll see what I'm talking about.

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infinitee

wow, epic stuff. I agree with you

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"You are, and shall be, set in obsidian obelisk.
Those scars, these memories, will see you through"