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Old 06-04-2007, 07:03 AM   #41
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Re: continue the poem

i know a word that rhymes with figure,
but if i say it, i'll be a silhouette.
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Old 06-04-2007, 07:26 AM   #42
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what do we do with those of us
who won't pull over for the dead or dying
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Old 06-04-2007, 11:08 AM   #43
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it doesn't matter to us as long as were not the ones crying
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Old 06-04-2007, 08:13 PM   #44
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I talk to myself
And I yell at myself.
but actions
speak louder than words.

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Old 06-04-2007, 08:19 PM   #45
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i ask of myself
what is myslef
for myslef is not a word
familiarized
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Old 06-04-2007, 08:53 PM   #46
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Old 06-04-2007, 09:02 PM   #47
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but really a burning bush found in her underwear.
Her pussy-hair I'd like to tear.
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Old 06-04-2007, 09:08 PM   #48
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but afterall it's our burden to bear
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Old 06-04-2007, 09:33 PM   #49
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(lol you spelt myself wrong.)
poetry = the bins sissy little brother lately.

poems.
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If you should ever track me down.
I will surrender there
And ill leave with you one broken man.
Whom I will teach you, to repair.

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Old 06-05-2007, 05:02 AM   #51
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you've used "whom" in the incorrect manner.
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Old 06-05-2007, 08:10 AM   #52
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and after all i say
and after all i do
i still agree
your anus smells like pooh
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Old 06-05-2007, 02:58 PM   #53
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If you should ever track me down.
I will surrender there
And ill leave with you one broken man.
Whom I will teach you, to repair.
I'll hand you the tools,
and ill surrender my wrists.
Both actions lead to futures
shrouded in mists.
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Old 06-05-2007, 04:24 PM   #54
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poems, man, wow.
i mean, poems.
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Old 06-05-2007, 06:32 PM   #55
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Bloodsuits at my door again,
Should I invite them?
Or will they find out that I sold
My soul 3 times before and the devil is looking to put me on the street as his personal whore.....
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Old 06-05-2007, 06:38 PM   #56
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lol Jevons you hypocrite
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Fuck it, I'll do the Devils work.
As long as the Devil remains a metaphor, I'm all for
finding a chainsaw and getting right down in to the thick of things.
I'm just so fucking sick of things.
Bloodsuits at the door again,
Ring the doorbell, come on in.
Let the fun and pain begin..
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Old 06-05-2007, 07:11 PM   #58
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Raw, worthless sonnets
And dry vodka tonics fill my days.
Cruelly seemingly angelic men
Filled to the brim with 'these' and 'those' ways to live.
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lol Jevons you hypocrite
Thats signature worthy, I believe.

I just thought Id point that out =P
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Old 06-07-2007, 12:08 PM   #60
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pointing out the rhymes of others,
singing along in my head when i can,
nothing seems to fit right;
the words get contorted, bruised by the wind.
A hypocrite, perhaps,
But i know what's best for you.
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Old 06-07-2007, 12:52 PM   #61
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Seas of words
Immerse stranded sailors
Who swim towards beacons
Deluded with notions of safety.
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Old 06-07-2007, 01:03 PM   #62
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I take it upon myself
To guide you to safety
But do you care about my intensions
If you drown anyway
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Old 06-07-2007, 01:36 PM   #63
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she smiles with that look of face
so hard not to be embraced
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Old 06-07-2007, 02:01 PM   #64
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as she elects a child to office.
''Should we invade, Billy?"
"Who?"
"Them."
"Who are they?"
"They are the resisters to our...."
"Umm."
"They are those terror...."
"Umm, what are terrorists?"
"Terrorists are people...."
"I don't want to hurt anyone. No."
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Old 06-07-2007, 04:36 PM   #65
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mung, tastes rich
fecal cloud, aint it a bitch
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Old 06-07-2007, 06:33 PM   #66
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eating tits and jerking off
I want to meet David Hasselhoff.
He's so big, and so fine,
I want to meet David Hasselhoff.
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Old 06-07-2007, 06:39 PM   #67
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Oh so wrong
Certainly not wise
and your avatar
hurts my eyes
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you could say its something that I despise
if you want people to help
just tempt them with a prize
and everyone, just like the others
will try to bow before their selfish brothers.
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Pretend that You're unable, then
What is false will transcend..
Make them believe that they're helping You..
Ignorant to the World.. They help themselves too
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angles in dirt
demons on the rise
the town falls to them
the city next in line
the world fears extinction
and pushes themselves to belive it
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"perception is reality"
is how an old man sees it
"I'm toast, man"
a young man strung across says
both-a-man, one old, one toast,
looks towards a flat horizon,
as the army edges up the coast
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His eyes burn
And his tears fall, but he doesn’t weep
Staggering, he keeps above his feet
A soulless shell
One who knows death all too well,
will find our friend, unaware.
And in the cacophonic churning,
With no dogma nor priest to blurt.
He finds, Freedom tastes a little of dirt.
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magma churning brimstone fires
think ill by some flame proof tires
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laugh out loud. My first thought--
Nicholas Cage in Ghost Rider..
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Your commentary is priceless. ^^

So I guess you like..?
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Art flies fast cause fiat won't last
bananas trickle past
and big brother knows the task
pointles burden of a mask

The ship sets sail at noon
And the brothers own the spoons
upon their feet are pontoons

hush little baby
that just meant maybe
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Old 06-10-2007, 08:54 PM   #78
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you want something special, a reason to get out of bed?
i don't have it and
apparently neither do you.

the reasons to remain tucked in there,
the lost idea of fauns
festers, forms a pot.

you'll weep your pillow dry.

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Old 06-10-2007, 10:40 PM   #79
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Yes, yes I will
I must accept the pain into myslef
and allow it to dissolve
I will get up tomarrow or I won't
it will just be one more day
after all
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stump, dead rotting stump
puzzle me with your decay
let me know your song
frothing festering putrid
my mother once said she be better this way
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