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Old 11-27-2007, 03:01 PM   #81
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Re: A Sad Man

That's pretty vague.
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Old 11-27-2007, 08:14 PM   #82
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He won't have seen that coming.

Plunkered most likely.

Plunkered, this much is true.
Vision is slightly obscured
natures creatures in partial view.

Exchanging glances in between O.o
Was it the Bavarian hops
or was it red and white sticky spice?

I forgot what I was saying...
Lost in space, hey bartender
Captain & Coke with ice!
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Old 11-27-2007, 08:17 PM   #83
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*hits lotus on the head with a sledgehammer*
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Old 11-27-2007, 08:19 PM   #84
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::kerplunk::
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Old 11-27-2007, 08:20 PM   #85
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*victorious standing pose with foot on lotus' chest*
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Old 11-28-2007, 05:33 PM   #86
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Re: A Sad Man

last time I was an empty well, I didn't feel a thing but empty.

*Pages Iota (message: "Look up") pulls a Jesus chin hair*
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Old 11-29-2007, 06:40 AM   #87
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NO ONE IS ABOVE ME

only my father
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Old 11-29-2007, 01:06 PM   #88
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Plunkered, this much is true.
Vision is slightly obscured
natures creatures in partial view.

Exchanging glances in between O.o
Was it the Bavarian hops
or was it red and white sticky spice?

I forgot what I was saying...
Lost in space, hey bartender
Captain & Coke with ice!
You're making me thirsty.
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Old 11-29-2007, 01:13 PM   #89
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*hits lotus on the head with a sledgehammer*
Whoa!

Attacking a plunkered man is low.

But thanks.

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::kerplunk::
Ouch!

*grabs your sword before you end up impaling yourself*

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*victorious standing pose with foot on lotus' chest*
Am I supposed to be swooning or something equally as lame?

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*Pages Iota (message: "Look up") pulls a Jesus chin hair*
Nice.
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Old 11-29-2007, 01:20 PM   #90
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abandoned dream...an empty well...no self doubt there?
Oh jeez, I dunno. Let me argue with myself for a bit and I may let myself get back to you? I don't know, it will be a tough call.
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Old 11-29-2007, 03:25 PM   #91
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Re: A Sad Man

:'( <--- A Sad Man
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Old 11-29-2007, 04:58 PM   #92
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Re: A Sad Man

Oh stop! The pair of you.

Iota, you are my court jester and hold a special place within my Kingdom.

Uriah, I dunno about you quite yet, but you are growing on me.
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Old 11-29-2007, 09:30 PM   #93
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<------ :)
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Old 11-30-2007, 10:45 AM   #94
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Haha. You're catching on.
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Old 11-30-2007, 05:58 PM   #95
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Re: A Sad Man

Should I be worried?
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Old 12-01-2007, 07:51 AM   #96
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Re: A Sad Man

Oh?

Then you clearly haven't googled my name.
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Old 12-03-2007, 07:32 AM   #97
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<------ :)
Good choice of avatar. Best for a long while, imo.

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I summon Dakkon Blackblade master of water and death to vanquish

oh wait that's not for you...
I should hope not.
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Old 12-03-2007, 03:20 PM   #98
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Avatar: Only for as long as I feel like a court jester.
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Old 12-04-2007, 11:07 AM   #99
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Re: A Sad Man

I like this one even more. Where did you find it?
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Old 12-04-2007, 04:30 PM   #100
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a kind gift from the sword-weilder: lotus san
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Old 12-04-2007, 10:30 PM   #101
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I am an empty well
if I were ever a well at all
dark
cracked soil
filled with pale echos and listless coins
wishes cast into my void

I am forgotten
built of dry earth
and distant glory
if ever there were glory at all

Your parched lips will find no answer
move away and let me be
for I am empty
dark
and full of nothing
but myself



I am an abandoned dream
if ever I were a dream at all
light
serene suffusion
born to entice sybaritic slumber
truly an awakening in disguise

I am remembered
during moments of inebriation
and ecstasy
if ever there were ecstasy at all

Your desires will find no fulfillment
let go and forget about me
for I am blinding
light
and full of everything
but myself
A man may not hide
from pure love
and expect to live
a life worth living.
With one blissful kiss
you'd see
how easily you've lied
to yourself sedated
from the weight of loneliness.
Has your heart grown tired
of chilling the bars
of a cell you designed
to suffocate your own passion?
Why run from true peace
you know she can bring?
I see through you Sad Man,
and I want my King.

I guard the gates
while the castle sleeps,
a shadow to swallow
the worst of enemies.
I, the light in the night
awaiting our King,
protecting your Queen
until you come clean.
I howl at the moon
who is stealing your sleep,
see, I never sleep
but don't weep for me,
for my heart is thriving,
extending the street
to your cage unwinding,
releasing you free.
Believe, old soul.
Won't you grace us, please?
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Old 12-05-2007, 11:55 AM   #102
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A man may not hide
from pure love
and expect to live
a life worth living.
With one blissful kiss
you'd see
how easily you've lied
to yourself sedated
from the weight of loneliness.
Has your heart grown tired
of chilling the bars
of a cell you designed
to suffocate your own passion?
Why run from true peace
you know she can bring?
I see through you Sad Man,
and I want my King.

I guard the gates
while the castle sleeps,
a shadow to swallow
the worst of enemies.
I, the light in the night
awaiting our King,
protecting your Queen
until you come clean.
I howl at the moon
who is stealing your sleep,
see, I never sleep
but don't weep for me,
for my heart is thriving,
extending the street
to your cage unwinding,
releasing you free.
Believe, old soul.
Won't you grace us, please?
Noice!


I'm awaiting the return of our King too Wolfie.
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Old 12-06-2007, 11:53 AM   #103
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Re: A Sad Man

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A man may not hide
from pure love
and expect to live
a life worth living.
With one blissful kiss
you'd see
how easily you've lied
to yourself sedated
from the weight of loneliness.
Has your heart grown tired
of chilling the bars
of a cell you designed
to suffocate your own passion?
Why run from true peace
you know she can bring?
I see through you Sad Man,
and I want my King.

I guard the gates
while the castle sleeps,
a shadow to swallow
the worst of enemies.
I, the light in the night
awaiting our King,
protecting your Queen
until you come clean.
I howl at the moon
who is stealing your sleep,
see, I never sleep
but don't weep for me,
for my heart is thriving,
extending the street
to your cage unwinding,
releasing you free.
Believe, old soul.
Won't you grace us, please?
You have made this Queen proud beyond measure, for your call is infinetly greater than I had dreamed it might be.

If this request is not heard, it will not be because your voice is weak.

Thank you.
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Old 12-07-2007, 07:12 AM   #104
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Re: A Sad Man

Shhhhhh Styx.
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Old 12-07-2007, 02:37 PM   #105
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Re: A Sad Man

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I am an empty well
if I were ever a well at all
dark
cracked soil
filled with pale echos and listless coins
wishes cast into my void
*throws a coin down*
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Old 12-07-2007, 02:48 PM   #106
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Re: A Sad Man

remy!

I looooooved your film!

omg you make me want to befriend rats...
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Old 12-07-2007, 03:01 PM   #107
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remy!

I looooooved your film!

omg you make me want to befriend rats...
Rats are interesting creatures.
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Old 12-07-2007, 03:06 PM   #108
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it's nice to have your avatar back iota.

those others were starting to freak me out...
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Old 12-07-2007, 03:08 PM   #109
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i will always come back to the rose regularly...

edit: tho the jesus/coca cola one was pretty cool, amirite?
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Rats are interesting creatures.
Someone once told me that they're the incarnation of fucked up, rotten, bad, and putrid feelings...

It's not true, is it Mr. Remy?
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"Ratatouille 2": Squirrel Stew"

:'(
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Old 12-07-2007, 04:18 PM   #112
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edit: tho the jesus/coca cola one was pretty cool, amirite?
tbh, that avatar was all up in my face and was the truly scary one. i kept picturing you as that McJesus and connecting your posts to that image...it was kinda funny but mostly creepy/freaky/diabolical...amirite?
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URRITE

>:)

EDIT: McJesus lol
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Old 12-07-2007, 06:29 PM   #114
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it's nice to have your avatar back iota.

those others were starting to freak me out...
I miss the jester.
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Old 12-07-2007, 07:47 PM   #115
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"Ratatouille 2": Squirrel Stew"

:'(
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Old 12-10-2007, 05:48 AM   #116
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Someone once told me that they're the incarnation of fucked up, rotten, bad, and putrid feelings...

It's not true, is it Mr. Remy?
Poor 'lil rats :(
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look at the thickness of the tail!

*barfs*
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