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Old 01-12-2015, 02:36 PM   #1
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Ham[murabi] on Rye

I'll take one, sliced diagonally,
with a side of [meso]potato chips
and mustard.
I'll eat it slowly and methodically.
Corners first. Right then left.
Everything even.
I eat the crusts. They have done me no harm.
Each chip crackles
like satisfaction
Twelve of them, then back to my sandwich.
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Old 01-12-2015, 04:03 PM   #2
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Re: Ham[murabi] on Rye

This piece made me smile. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Also, what kind of monster doesn't slice their sandwiches diagonally.

EDIT: How does murabi work into this and what does it mean?

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Old 01-13-2015, 08:14 AM   #3
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Re: Ham[murabi] on Rye

Oh, I just took that dude's name Hammurabi and made it sound like a sandwich. Then, because he was Babylonian (Mesopotamian) I made the 'tato chips that way.
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Re: Ham[murabi] on Rye

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