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Old 09-02-2013, 05:54 AM   #1
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Whispers

Sometimes ghosts
Seem closer about
A sudden shiver
A pyschic jolt
Whispers echo
And certain truths
Nearly connect

In liquid images
Always in periphery
A canopy of souls
Dancing in shadows
Exempt of doom or mirth
Watching us
Shake the bones
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Old 09-02-2013, 11:31 AM   #2
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Re: Whispers

Certain truths nearly connect. This is great gonz. sensing silent observers. are they emotionless or empathetic? Living vicariously through the television in the waiting room of life?
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