01-13-2015, 10:30 AM
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Parch Tone
I was sailing
skating
along on your adoring wings
That was before
before
you were gone
I miss your light
warm sunshine on my face
an eagle in full flight
They say
it's better to crash and burn
than it is to trust
Without you
your sensual bliss
I'm turning to rust
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01-13-2015, 12:20 PM
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Re: Parch Tone
I get a bit of a Neil Young kind of vibe from bits of this. It is a couple trigger words/phrasing that get me, so I dunno if it was intentional or not.
I'd like to know a bit more about the title.
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01-13-2015, 02:15 PM
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Re: Parch Tone
It's a nod to Neil Young for sure. Nice catch.
When I was a printing press operator, I used to run a fancy parchment paper that was called Parchtone. Parched came to my mind orginally for the title. To loosely provide the vibe.
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01-13-2015, 02:53 PM
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Re: Parch Tone
I like it. Loose connections and all.
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01-13-2015, 03:36 PM
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Re: Parch Tone
Thanks, Fuzzy. I appreciate it.
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