06-14-2005, 09:02 AM
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Level 9 - Obstreperous
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: Roasting in the oven
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A Thing
I am restless
I am fluid
I am shapeless
I am gathering
I am growing
I am forming
I am action
I am beauty
I am existence
I am seen
I am art
I am experience
I am fading
I am lost
I am past
I was.
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06-14-2005, 09:21 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Cali-forn-I-E
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Re: A Thing
I like it. I like these random type "I am" poems. Nice work.
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06-14-2005, 10:28 AM
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Level 6 - Very Deep Thinker
Join Date: May 2005
Location: my own little world
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Re: A Thing
i like the "I was" at the end. its good.
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