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Old 08-26-2007, 10:14 PM   #1
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Moonlight Reveries

Floating in the night, an amber crescent
Hanging like a pendant on a chain
Let your quilt be made of moon beams
Let the evening jasmine weave your dreams

These moonlight reveries are coming back to me
And I can't seem to get you out of my mind
My thoughts are running back and forth today
Your voice will be my midnight soliloquay

These silken sheets wrap around me like a coil
The crickets asphyxiate on forgotten songs
But as long as you are still in my dreams
This insomnia isn't as obscene.

I am falling into the void of the night
This moonlight will prove to be my tomb
I am dreaming of a rope in which to climb
But as long as you're still with me I don't mind.

These moonlight reveries are coming back to me
And I can't seem to get your out of my mind
Pathetic as it seems I am still dreaming
Dreaming, because its for you that I pine.

The breeze shall cradle me against adversity
The moon shall by my shield against the day
As long as my back is too the sunshine
I can keep dreaming of your painted face

So let this light pour over me,
As long as I don't have to see
Whatever it is that seems to mean
That night should fade away.
So let this dream come true
These visions I have of you
I don't want to wake up
I want to dream forever.

Just dream forever.
These moonlight reveries are coming back to me
Just dream forever.
And I can't seem to get you out of my mind.
Just dream forever.
As long as I'm asleep I will find
Just dream forever.
I've got the strength to keep you by my side.

Just dream forever.
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Old 08-27-2007, 11:37 AM   #2
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Re: Moonlight Reveries

Quite the contridiction of dreams. One apparently derived of insomnia:
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But as long as you are still in my dreams
This insomnia isn't as obscene.
while the same dream is beget by sleep:
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As long as I'm asleep I will find
Just dream forever.
I've got the strength to keep you by my side.

Just dream forever.
It seems unlikely that you'd acieve the same state of mind in both scenarios.
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