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Old 04-16-2010, 10:19 PM   #1
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Fuck

Fuck

Wrong hertz.
We will meet in Château.
Laters ,lates,later,late
...in Château.
Surrounded by the garden of eden.
Eden surrounded.
We are even.
Eventually.
Even tho we always were even ,even when anything @ all was in line. ONLINE
Immeasurable.Unforeseen.Unforgettable.
Metaphorical Tennis rehearsal between two.
Here .Put.
Ready steady.Go.
Grind.Flash of equations.
Total underground guru.mogul
Unequalled.1st time.Time parable.
Golden glitter.
MaX around equinox.
Round about.

Commas & dots spread like flyers .
crystallize the costliness of the bit that came loose.
F€#%
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Old 04-17-2010, 09:58 PM   #2
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Re: Fuck

New age poem:
I crave thy [censored].
I love you [censored].
Flirt does not come even close.
Lust does not hold a change.
Nowhere near passion.
Love overrated.umm.
Pleasure irrelevant.
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Old 04-18-2010, 12:04 AM   #3
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Re: Fuck

awsome combination of visual and literature singlevinyl!
that was a big thing for me when i was majoring in visual art at my school-
combining those two facets on a canvas, it was like the art beckoned me after i wrote a piece to illustrate the text and i just kind of played around in it but i really do love your contrast in between.
*kudos*
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Old 04-18-2010, 04:30 AM   #4
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i swear to kevin, you have a 23-year-old Lou Reed locked up in your basement.
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Old 04-19-2010, 09:06 PM   #5
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I keep it short this time.

TY .
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Old 04-20-2010, 03:27 AM   #6
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sweet
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