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Old 09-02-2007, 04:02 PM   #1
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Door

Door

Never knowing yourself
showing everyone your feelings
yet blind to your thoughts
quick to blame others
you hate by color love through lies
power found in weakness
turns into fear
the truth brings on the tears
ignorance your only defense
not wanting to reason
you cleave with your judgment
leaving no ones moral to high
cant accept your shame
of your aimless life
staying on your dead end road
on the way to your dead end life
standing behind the door
unable to pass
your life of nothing
coming to a close
dont try and save yourself.

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Old 09-02-2007, 04:42 PM   #2
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Re: Door

visceral....powerful....such is the world....
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