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ambivalentika
10-24-2010, 01:22 PM
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Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, [erase, so / a razor]
Shelter turned to home

changes to

Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, ARRANGE SO
Shelter TURNS to home
Old 10-24-2010, 01:22 PM   #1
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possible lyric change?

Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, [erase, so / a razor]
Shelter turned to home

changes to

Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, ARRANGE SO
Shelter TURNS to home
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10-24-2010, 01:30 PM
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crap
forgot to add this aswell

Spark becomes a flame
Flame becomes a fire
Light the way or warm this
Hope we occupy

changes to

Spark becomes a flame
Flame becomes a fire
Light the way or warm this
HOME we occupy

just an idea
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Re: possible lyric change?

crap
forgot to add this aswell

Spark becomes a flame
Flame becomes a fire
Light the way or warm this
Hope we occupy

changes to

Spark becomes a flame
Flame becomes a fire
Light the way or warm this
HOME we occupy

just an idea
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08-09-2011, 09:21 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ambivalentika View Post
Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, [erase, so / a razor]
Shelter turned to home

changes to

Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, ARRANGE SO
Shelter TURNS to home
close...

Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, AND RAISE SO
Shelter TURNS to home

What makes a shelter or a house a home? Being raised there.
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Re: possible lyric change?

Quote:
Originally Posted by ambivalentika View Post
Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, [erase, so / a razor]
Shelter turned to home

changes to

Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, ARRANGE SO
Shelter TURNS to home
close...

Pure as we begin
Here we have a stone
Gather, place, AND RAISE SO
Shelter TURNS to home

What makes a shelter or a house a home? Being raised there.
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08-10-2011, 09:27 AM
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Both work. And both have been suggested.
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Both work. And both have been suggested.
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I've also thought erase was wrong or just didn't fit, BUT i think it is "and raise" because arrange would have a hard "G" sound at the end, which we clearly can't hear before so, so i think "and raise" is correct.
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I've also thought erase was wrong or just didn't fit, BUT i think it is "and raise" because arrange would have a hard "G" sound at the end, which we clearly can't hear before so, so i think "and raise" is correct.
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