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Old 09-18-2011, 01:11 AM   #1
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Sept 21st

This day.
One year ago.
I watched myself wither to ash.
Bleeding tears of sinew.
No bones, just soul.
He had a name.
No god, no breath, no entrance.
But a tilted wisdom.
A confined way to dwindle.
A harrowed glance of pestles.

Goodbye.
I would've loved.
Forlorn.
A loss greater than life.
No peaceful solution.
Not for the supernatural gimmick.
No joyous sobs of burdened bliss.
Just a curse and a fist, and a spirit denied.
Fuck you all.
Enwombed.

Me first.
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Old 09-21-2011, 01:40 PM   #2
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Re: Sept 21st

Hey, FUck That Bitch is wat I say... but it just wasnt his time.

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Old 09-22-2011, 03:16 AM   #3
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Re: Sept 21st

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Hey, FUck That Bitch is wat I say... but it just wasnt his time.
Your ass. A place. You live inside. Eternally.
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Old 09-23-2011, 05:56 PM   #4
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Re: Sept 21st

quite nice
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