x7 Lateralus 7x

Just some song I hope to try to make up when I get home, I'm at work right now.

I decided to use things from the poetry I've written here in it, I have this real cool sound in mind for it too... hopefully my equipment can hack it. Poetically I could say that this sucks, but as a song it might be another worthy tune, hopefully.

Let me know what you think i.e. what I should change.


Trying to remember what she said,
she said...

Verse 1:

Found a room, that
I've never seen,
covered in memories
wall after wall and I
(must wake up)
And I
(must hide from)
who, what, where, when and why.

I said:

Chorus:

"Drenched the sky with all my soul,
rained one wish upon her home:
Break the veil that holds her so,
I need to hear the voice of a rose."

trying to remember what she said,

she said...

Verse 2:

Another night,
lost to myself and another of whom I must
not, name for if he had came he would reckon that I
had summoned, a deathwish of eternity in a place that
I've never seen, covered in memories.

Chorus:
"Drenched the sky with all my soul,
rained one wish upon her home:
Break the veil that holds her so
I need to hear the voice of a rose."

Bridge:

she said:

"Love ya", before I realized my daydream,
The walls and the imagery, symbols and orchestre.
Now, this must end (you and I),
find someone else,
For my sin (you and I),
seems unforgiven (But I've finally been awakened)

(chorus again)

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Rotten Peaches