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Old 05-24-2007, 07:41 AM   #1
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The Waste

I find it amazing..
Being everything I hate
Lying when its easy; Being that hypocrite
when I understand that I dont appreciate
all that is given to Me, not by choice
But by being lucky or being blessed..

I feel as if..
I must become a better person
knowing the whole time that I am perfect
the way I am, even in imperfection;
to learn to embrace the shadow.
But I couldnt, wouldnt, peer that deep into..

Its that bright light, that I wont let shine
Without the darkness there was nothing to search for.
At least, thats why, I'm convinced there's a reason..

I see..
A future of happiness, bright sunshine and love
but I fear that something, uncertainty, will make this not true..?
I question as hours pass. Each time looking to the clock:
I'm growing older, I'm growing colder, and why?
Knowing all the while that My Mind betrays Me.
Knowingly, and Helpless but not to stop.
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Old 05-27-2007, 11:56 AM   #2
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Re: The Waste

I really enjoyed this piece.

For me it was reassurance and a reminder to myself that despite all my imperfections, I'm me.

Don't know if that's what it's meant to make me think but it works for me.

Oh and what the hell is a Hypnotoad?
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Old 05-28-2007, 07:18 AM   #3
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Re: The Waste

tyvm. Yes, you are correct in thinking that.

btw I love Your avatar.

The Hypnotoad came from an Episode of Futurama. The Hypnotoad knows the one true secret to pleasing everyone =P
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And tyvm.

Does the hypnotoad ever reveal this secret?
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Old 05-28-2007, 12:41 PM   #5
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Well, absolutely. And its quite clever actually.. =)

(He hypnotized the judges to win, along with the entire audience to cheer for Him after He had won the competition.)
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Old 05-28-2007, 05:55 PM   #6
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Fucking awesome, It almost made me cry. It may seem so at times, but I am never alone.
FOR WE ALL ARE BROTHERS AND THESE TEARS ARE SHARED AS SHED.
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Old 05-28-2007, 06:30 PM   #7
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Re: The Waste

I realise, that its not something that can be destroyed.
I am a machine spawned in the depths of infinite oblivion.
Its not about what I know, or what I think.
Its about how I Act, as that is where man fails.
Fortitude through the darks seas under starless skies.
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Old 05-28-2007, 08:42 PM   #8
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medication never lies.
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