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Old 05-23-2007, 05:20 AM   #1
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A Rather Unique Dream You NEVER Want...

So I opened a window today
And found in spite of my narrow views
A thin slit of light and dark blue air
The morning soon to come

I left my home and closed my door
Feeling like I had left more than just a simple building behind
Decided to shrug it off and I went about on my usual walk

Was it just me, or did the ground light up
No matter where I placed a foot

Looking around the neighborhood to see if anyone else noticed
I then recalled that there was no one out but me

BRIGHT LIGHT indeed.

Explosion, the light overtaking all senses
Blinded
I feel like the air is ripped out of my lungs
And I collapse, curled up like a babe at birth

...
Waking up, I get up calmly to find myself covered in dirt and blood
I return home to find home is gone
The place lit up like a cigarette that had just been tossed aside
Ashes and little flames and lost treasures
Home is now gone.
And without it, so am I.
WAKE UP.
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Old 05-23-2007, 05:52 AM   #2
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Re: A Rather Unique Dream You NEVER Want...

God... it gives me shivers...
A dream within' a dream is really something incredible to experience... but not always funny...
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Old 05-23-2007, 07:20 AM   #3
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Re: A Rather Unique Dream You NEVER Want...

i dreamt i was being attacked by snetinels from the x-men last night, they were loud and horrendously realistic and it scared me. i think i peed a little even. also very good expression friend keep at it
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Re: A Rather Unique Dream You NEVER Want...

At least once a month for me... it is really, ummm, disorienting, to say the least. I like the descriptions.
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Old 05-23-2007, 09:18 AM   #5
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it hasnt happened to me often but on 2 occasions it was like i was traveling through alternate realities because i had about 17 dreams within a dream and every time id wake up i was in another drem thinking i was awake, until some sort of black cloud would start eating me then id wake up into another dream
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Old 05-23-2007, 10:24 AM   #6
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At least once a month for me... it is really, ummm, disorienting, to say the least. I like the descriptions.
we must be on the same cycle. I'm on lunar time, what do you set your watch to?
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Old 05-23-2007, 10:32 AM   #7
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we must be on the same cycle. I'm on lunar time, what do you set your watch to?
Sex... but my watch has stopped.
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the moon is reliable, you should consider investing in a new watch. I know, a monetary investment would be easier.
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The moon doesn't always come up. And my watch is just fine. I need a new battery. Just haven't gone to the store.
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it's monthly cycle is infallible.



my apologies to the creator of this thread.
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it's monthly cycle is infallible.



my apologies to the creator of this thread.
Mine as well, I didn't mean to hijack it. (And my dreams are not cyclical... they come at random times, monthly is approximate.)
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it hasnt happened to me often but on 2 occasions it was like i was traveling through alternate realities because i had about 17 dreams within a dream and every time id wake up i was in another drem thinking i was awake, until some sort of black cloud would start eating me then id wake up into another dream
woah... must be freaked out or phased out for the whole day after that...
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it's monthly cycle is infallible.



my apologies to the creator of this thread.
Why apologize? I find your commentary entertaining.
But seriously, I just got on and found that people commented on this one. I'm glad; it's the first time i've written anything strong in over a month. I think i'm going to have to keep it, all right.
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Old 05-25-2007, 09:55 AM   #14
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woah... must be freaked out or phased out for the whole day after that...
my mind handles these things rather well actually. i dont understand insane people who get freaked out by their own manifestations, then again i believe i am all that exists and everything subjective is just a manifestation of my own imagination so i just kinda live like ive always been and when this shit happens i just kinda ride it out and see where it goes
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my mind handles these things rather well actually. i dont understand insane people who get freaked out by their own manifestations, then again i believe i am all that exists and everything subjective is just a manifestation of my own imagination so i just kinda live like ive always been and when this shit happens i just kinda ride it out and see where it goes
Nice.
I was thinkin' more about the "phased out" rather than the "freaked out" anyway...
My vision isn't so far from yours, and I actually enjoy these kind of dreams... it inspires a lot.

But it still makes the following day a bit unreal, doesn't it !
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