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Old 05-25-2007, 07:21 AM   #1
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start thinkin ahead

stop, look in, look out
can you tolerate the resemblence
does the image of all fill your heart or your dread
slow down, maybe stop
its not working maybe we need to rethink

further down the line
we dont need the foresight to see how this ends
so then why do we perpetuate our own demise,
is it fear, that the positive within
may come true and break down our walls
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Old 05-25-2007, 08:49 AM   #2
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Re: start thinkin ahead

Out of curiousity, and for the fact i'm trying to get a handle on this piece, is it a poem or lyrics?
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Old 05-25-2007, 09:50 AM   #3
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Re: start thinkin ahead

brain damage is rampant in my country.
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Old 05-28-2007, 11:49 PM   #4
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Re: start thinkin ahead

poem
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Old 05-28-2007, 11:49 PM   #5
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jevons, what is meant by your comment?
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Old 05-29-2007, 09:53 AM   #6
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Re: start thinkin ahead

Nice. I can relate to this piece, very much in fact.
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