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Old 05-25-2007, 12:07 AM   #1
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Tedious Reverie
we stuggle everyday to live in the sun
original
where we were born

You lost the fire that burns within your soul
the key to enlightenment

No one is buying
into the lies
you tell as we can see past
the barrier that is your eyes

We knew
since time was conceived
the power of the world.

Love
commits to suicide with order and sanity
Hate
plays with a childs fragile soul

Enough of this non-existent dream

A vision of nightmares
becomes reality
as we sit awaiting...
you will
soon see
the light.
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Old 05-27-2007, 12:24 AM   #2
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Re: Tedious Reverie
this just made me cry
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Old 05-27-2007, 03:07 PM   #3
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Cool....
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Old 05-29-2007, 10:48 AM   #4
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Re: Tedious Reverie
Beautiful. I can't quite tell if it is hopeful or not though. Maybe so, the ending suggests it...
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Old 05-29-2007, 06:18 PM   #5
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Re: Tedious Reverie
it is...like no matter what you will see.
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Old 05-29-2007, 06:47 PM   #6
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Re: Tedious Reverie
Coooooool.
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