03-28-2008, 07:41 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
ephemeral
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03-28-2008, 07:55 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
garblings of these memories.
they have no power.
they are the putrefaction of tomorrow,
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03-29-2008, 01:42 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
forecasting Sun
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03-29-2008, 09:21 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
yet, the compages obscure it
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03-29-2008, 11:11 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
If only my solvent hadn't rinsed from my pockets...
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03-30-2008, 05:15 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
the pages wiped clean with the piss of angels
smudged with archaeopteryne feathers
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Reason: I invented the word archaeopteryne
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03-30-2008, 10:24 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
MY
GOD
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03-31-2008, 10:17 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Bump.
Time and place to say goodbye, to walk away and turn the eye
To live is to learn, so they say
Always remember but live for today
For sorrows-past may still ache when it rains
and certian syllables can halt any attempt at being brave
Before speech, I was amused endlessly by my hands.
my spine stands, my mind falls
Nothing more meaningful than a kick in the balls
Wet yesterday's have no grip, save for what swells around synaptic joints, freezes
ephemeral
garblings of these memories.
they have no power.
they are the putrefaction of tomorrow,
forecasting Sun
yet, the compages obscure it
If only my solvent hadn't rinsed from my pockets...
the pages wiped clean with the piss of angels
smudged with archaeopteryne feathers
MY
GOD
I thought that was a good spot to wrap it up. I also felt it was pertinent to include the first "bump" line. What do you guys think?
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03-31-2008, 02:23 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
As it turns out, this is as good, if not better than most of what is written here.
Nice job, Taxi.
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03-31-2008, 03:13 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Right back atcha, Moloch.
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04-01-2008, 08:58 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
well i'm just happy to have squeaked in on it. it has a degree of cohesion that's, that's kind of scary, all things considered. the images move around, drag you here or there, but retain this chronological, even centrifical style. Jayar's "sorrows -past may still ache when it rains" got this liquid motif tangent going, eventually ending with "angels' piss"...
i don't know, shit, a right fucking success.
edit: someone sticky this bitch, for fucking please?
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04-03-2008, 07:15 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
May as well keep this shit moving
Beat it bloody and bruising.
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04-09-2008, 04:24 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Red-starved meat and larvae blooming
The Earth, the hearse; the sky, its jewel.
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04-14-2008, 08:52 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
and for all it's worth, here's one more line
cross the bridge and pay the fine
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08-12-2008, 07:13 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
injustice cracks under the feather's pressure
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08-12-2008, 11:12 PM
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give way to a towering ginko below
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08-18-2008, 11:37 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
earth and sky bisected,
inscribing a final arc on all tomorrows
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06-03-2009, 07:25 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Let's do this again seeing as we all seem to be so dead
I'll start, follow along if you feel like it
Fibrous tendons caress
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06-04-2009, 02:53 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Swallowed by silence theres no better tune
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06-16-2009, 07:57 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Ruled by movement, referee'd by constraint
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06-16-2009, 08:24 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Realizing consistency only matters to the inconsistent
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06-16-2009, 08:29 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Residents wandering the swamp
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09-06-2009, 10:33 AM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
the coal fire burns best when left without sunlight's breath
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09-07-2009, 04:59 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
uhh, you guys miss the new one?
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09-07-2009, 06:12 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
holla entraped by deep blue
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09-07-2009, 08:05 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
what shit is this, and why's it on you?
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09-08-2009, 12:31 PM
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Re: the exquisite cadaver
Fuck you guys
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