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Old 05-12-2004, 06:43 AM   #41
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Re: Morningstar

Heh, you finally discovered it.

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After all, it is her sculpture.
Good point there...
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Old 05-12-2004, 08:36 AM   #42
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Re: Morningstar

I'm amazed this thread has gotten this long.
strange that morningstar hasn't said anything for awhile.
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Old 05-12-2004, 08:39 AM   #43
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Re: Morningstar

She isn't on too much, and I dont think she really cares about this whole situation this poem created... I guess she just likes it and wanna leave it to that.
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Old 05-12-2004, 09:27 AM   #44
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Re: Morningstar

maybe being polite and saving you from the truth
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Old 05-12-2004, 09:42 AM   #45
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Re: Morningstar

Hah... she would tell me if she didn't liked it... I'm sure of that.
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Old 05-12-2004, 10:00 AM   #46
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Re: Morningstar

It's better then what I write. I don't like it much, but It's mostly because I don't understand it. I tried, but I can't.
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Old 05-12-2004, 10:41 AM   #47
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Re: Morningstar

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I waited for this... cause now I get REAL critic... thank you.

WTF? I didn't like your piece of crap writing, and therefore I'm not a "real" critic? Shut the fuck up already you pretentious little bastard.
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Old 05-12-2004, 10:43 AM   #48
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Re: Morningstar

And boytoydotcom, listen to the point thrak is making. Who the hell are you to criticize me for criticizing windir's writing? You and your fucking relativism. Dammit.

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Old 05-12-2004, 11:54 PM   #49
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Hah... she would tell me if she didn't liked it... I'm sure of that.
Boy, I wish I had someone to speak for me.
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Re: Morningstar

comfortably numb is uncontrollably in love with me.

How'd I do?
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Re: Morningstar

Took the words right out of my mouth.
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What would you like me to replace them with? :P
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:O!

Oh, the innuendos!
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I love them.
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Re: Morningstar

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Good-natured sarcasm, I hope.
I'm glad you see the humor in my response, it was not intended to pinch you.

Relativism requires a lot more discipline than many would dare believe. Whilst it enables its advocates an easy means of defense, it also removes entirely their capacity to criticise.

What if I wanted to get my mullet in a knot, after all? Who would you be to judge that? I'm not trying to be hostile, here, but relativism is a very sharp double-edged blade, and I think that this is overlooked far too often.
I'm frustrated due to the fact of Mr. Mcpheezy flaunting his eago like he's
Jesus Fucking Christ, if there ever was one. I just feel there are too many
eago driven individuals making remarks about other individuals' artistic natures.
Constructive criticism is one thing, intentional verbal bashing is another. After
all, this isn't boot camp, it's just a forum.
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Old 05-13-2004, 03:56 AM   #56
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I'm amazed this thread has gotten this long.
strange that morningstar hasn't said anything for awhile.
To be honest, I don't care about this discussion..
And windir, I can speak for myself.
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Re: Morningstar

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To be honest, I don't care about this discussion..
And windir, I can speak for myself.
and that solves the mystery of the missing donut.
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Old 05-13-2004, 08:19 AM   #58
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Re: Morningstar

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WTF? I didn't like your piece of crap writing, and therefore I'm not a "real" critic? Shut the fuck up already you pretentious little bastard.
Hah, its because you only said it sucked... but that is no critic IMO.
I think you need to express WHY you dont like it and also what I can improve.
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Re: Morningstar

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To be honest, I don't care about this discussion..
And windir, I can speak for myself.
I know you can speak for yourself, but does that mean I cant say what I think?
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Re: Morningstar

Yes, you can, but you were assuming my opinion on this discussion.
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Re: Morningstar

Well, if you didnt like my poem, you would've said that, right?
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Hah, its because you only said it sucked... but that is no critic IMO.
I think you need to express WHY you dont like it and also what I can improve.


No, you moron. I fucking outlined all the parts that confused me. I commented a few different parts that ruined the poem for me because I couldn't understand them, making it difficult for me to understand the poem.


Yes, it sucks. Fucking deal with it. I can't believe you missed all of my other comments on the poem. Go back and reread my initial post, dispshit.
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Re: Morningstar

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I'm frustrated due to the fact of Mr. Mcpheezy flaunting his eago like he's
Jesus Fucking Christ, if there ever was one. I just feel there are too many
eago driven individuals making remarks about other individuals' artistic natures.
Constructive criticism is one thing, intentional verbal bashing is another. After
all, this isn't boot camp, it's just a forum.

At least I can spell the word ego.


I don't like Windir's poetry. I'm honest about it. I'm a harsh critic, yes, but just fucking try to see past that to the points I make. They're usually worth paying attention to.
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Re: Morningstar

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No, you moron. I fucking outlined all the parts that confused me. I commented a few different parts that ruined the poem for me because I couldn't understand them, making it difficult for me to understand the poem.


Yes, it sucks. Fucking deal with it. I can't believe you missed all of my other comments on the poem. Go back and reread my initial post, dispshit.
I read it... and I'll keep it in mind.
But you made it come over, as you thought it sucked, like you just admitted.

Anyway... thank you for your comments, then.
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Well, if you didnt like my poem, you would've said that, right?
Yes.
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Ok... thank you.
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