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the_milkman
12-21-2010, 02:09 PM

I've been working with FL studio lately and i'm sorta gettin the hang of it. Thought i'd share a few of my works in progress with you dudes so you can tell me what you think. Enjoy and please any feedback is appreciated!

http://soundcloud.com/radiofi3nd

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12-21-2010, 02:09 PM	#1
the_milkman well if I know Dracula, he loves SLUTS Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: lols angeles Posts: 2,592 Bincount™: 7555	stuff I've been working with FL studio lately and i'm sorta gettin the hang of it. Thought i'd share a few of my works in progress with you dudes so you can tell me what you think. Enjoy and please any feedback is appreciated! http://soundcloud.com/radiofi3nd __________________ Smashing Pumpkins sounds like a bag of shit doing a cartwheel. -mope
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Seven Deep
12-28-2010, 05:56 PM

Only speaking on the mixing side here but a lot of your tracks would benefit from less, or at least less wet effects usage. The reverbs on the bass kind of muddy everything up and take away from most of the elements that should be more up front.

I get the idea you're going for in the tracks, but that usually lends itself to a bigger sound, which often counter-intuitively relies less on using effects like reverbs and choruses that are supposed to imply "fullness" and more on the sound simply being in the listeners face.

The arrangement itself could use a few more changeups or breaks to keep things fresh.

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12-28-2010, 05:56 PM	#2
Seven Deep Level 13 - Nothing Can Defeat the Quad Laser Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Chicago Posts: 9,563 Bincount™: 2924	Re: stuff Only speaking on the mixing side here but a lot of your tracks would benefit from less, or at least less wet effects usage. The reverbs on the bass kind of muddy everything up and take away from most of the elements that should be more up front. I get the idea you're going for in the tracks, but that usually lends itself to a bigger sound, which often counter-intuitively relies less on using effects like reverbs and choruses that are supposed to imply "fullness" and more on the sound simply being in the listeners face. The arrangement itself could use a few more changeups or breaks to keep things fresh. Last edited by Seven Deep; 12-28-2010 at 05:58 PM..
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the_milkman
12-28-2010, 11:44 PM

thanks, you definitely know what you're talking about. lol, i have been messing around alot with the reverb and delay effects on the bass to see just how much more "full" and loud it can sound. as far as the arrangement goes, i may add on to these tracks as i become more technically skilled but for now they are just fun little beats. i do appreciate the constructive criticism though. and i'll most likely be putting new tracks up frequently lol.

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Smashing Pumpkins sounds like a bag of shit doing a cartwheel.
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12-28-2010, 11:44 PM	#3
the_milkman well if I know Dracula, he loves SLUTS Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: lols angeles Posts: 2,592 Bincount™: 7555	Re: stuff thanks, you definitely know what you're talking about. lol, i have been messing around alot with the reverb and delay effects on the bass to see just how much more "full" and loud it can sound. as far as the arrangement goes, i may add on to these tracks as i become more technically skilled but for now they are just fun little beats. i do appreciate the constructive criticism though. and i'll most likely be putting new tracks up frequently lol. __________________ Smashing Pumpkins sounds like a bag of shit doing a cartwheel. -mope
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