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Old 03-16-2010, 11:52 PM   #1
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inamorata
Incandescent
blue flame fingers roaming free,
marking my skin
claiming territory

Your breath ~
invisible tentacles,
icicles exploring

back arching spasms
skalpel sharp shivers
clenching fists

Thirsty senses eager ~
gulping
lapping up

this,
sensual manipulation

Soporific whispers
deliciously invasive ~
most wanted

every cell cognizant

The balance tips ~
primal instincts imerge
I indulge
in your warmth

ecstasy
blazing ferver
savage symmetrical motion ~

Passion manifesting,
bleeding out
taking control ~

Unearthly intimate aromas
pushing me into the red

We are blinding white light ~

conjoint souls
clawing at paper thin skin
itching,
yearning

surrender

blood sweat semen saliva

connected
bound

lovers
~
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Old 03-17-2010, 06:50 PM   #2
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I find all your work interesting.
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Old 03-17-2010, 08:30 PM   #3
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GODLIKE
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Old 03-17-2010, 11:33 PM   #4
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Kushdi!
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Old 03-17-2010, 11:54 PM   #5
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thanks for the kind words.
i actually cant take all the credit though.

It is a song that Shardzo and myself worked on together.
He actually had a lot more to do with it than i did. but i felt like posting it up anyway
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