The ghost just turned around
And theres a look in his eyes
That says he's safe and sound
And asked if i wouldnt mind
If he could stay with me
'Cause hes a little affraid
To take it on himself
And just go back to his grave
Just Go
It's getting a little cold in here
The ghost is getting near
Well i wish that he'd just dissapear
Or go away from here
And everytime the ghost
Takes another look at me
I'm winded and i choke
And now ill never be the same
The ghost just left me now
And theres that look in his eyes
And i feel lost somehow
Without him by my side
I wish he'd stay with me
'Cause im a little affraid
To take it on myself
And just go on with the day.
It's getting a little cold in here
The ghost is getting near
Well i wish that he'd just dissapear
Or go away from here
And everytime the ghost
Takes another look at me
I'm winded and i choke
And now ill never be the same
Out of curiosity what are you considering these lines? Some types of Bridges? I am guessing you have at least 3 main riffs? Verse, Chorus, Bridge? Bridge?, Verse, Chorus right?
I think the Idea/concept along with the content is good. The only thing that didn't work for me in the lyrics was "The Ghost" refrences. I have no Idea why but it just seems that something else...describing the same thing would fit better to me..IMHO......
Also is there any thing else to the Chorus...repeats of "Just Go" etc?
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Chorus:
It's getting a little cold in here
The ghost is getting near
Well i wish that he'd just dissapear
Or go away from here
And everytime the ghost
Takes another look at me
I'm winded and i choke
And now ill never be the same
That what you mean?
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Doomed to crumble unless we grow, and strengthen our communication
Prechorus:
It's getting a little cold in here
The ghost is getting near
Well i wish that he'd just dissapear
Or go away from here
Chorus
And everytime the ghost
Takes another look at me
I'm winded and i choke
And now ill never be the same
"just go" kind of just builds it up. the verse itself is very calm, then the choruses are heavy, so Just Go is kind of shouted/grumbled to build it up
Ah kewl....thanks for the break down....
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