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one of my newer songs, plz some feedback:

The ghost just turned around
And theres a look in his eyes
That says he's safe and sound
And asked if i wouldnt mind
If he could stay with me
'Cause hes a little affraid
To take it on himself
And just go back to his grave

Just Go

It's getting a little cold in here
The ghost is getting near
Well i wish that he'd just dissapear
Or go away from here

And everytime the ghost
Takes another look at me
I'm winded and i choke
And now ill never be the same

The ghost just left me now
And theres that look in his eyes
And i feel lost somehow
Without him by my side
I wish he'd stay with me
'Cause im a little affraid
To take it on myself
And just go on with the day.



then the chorus' again.

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