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Level 10 - Vehement
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: Ames, IA
Posts: 2,528
Bincount™: 322
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"Curtains!"
(this is for a creative writing workshop, and i dunno, i think it is sub par and too serious, any suggestions?)
marooned hibiscus flowers gesture through the glass
just-before-rain darkness behind a luster lime foreground: rainbow conditions
silhouettes of folage against deep stone midnight
shadows shiver behind the couch, slinking closer to the hearth
i turn, the window pane captures the horizon’s silver lining
whispy wheat grass spreads beneath my feet
distant branches creak above prophetic verse
astral paint hides between the hibiscus: lunar spider web
The Moon moves
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