Parts of it impressed me, such as the intro sounds/beat. But, some of the parts sound flagrantly 'demo-y' in terms of repetition, rhythm complexity and tone. That's all. I still think the song as a whole kicks major ass. It was more of a general comment than anything.

Pugs, I look forward to the next stuff you demo out. You've inspired me to maybe record some of my shit. How do you manage the copyright protection and all of that? That's one thing that's always concerned me about posting originals on the internet.