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Re: Split Personality?
'There was a time that the pieces fit' - you see the feminine character move along a wall.
'but I watched them fall away' - you see the other character hiding.
The rest of it behind it, you see her bending, hands and feet on the floor and banging with her head. The guy character comes in later.
I cant seem to fit those pieces with the rest.
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