Level 7 - Loquacious
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: 901
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Re: The Pit
I love every piece of this. I try to rotate it upon different narrating perspectives and it works in multiple ways.
Gambling on antiquated languages; things so large they become occult; a hum in the universe so strong and steady that it both crumbles everything into dust and animates the tiny particles into an endless dance of vibratory divinity;
something plain and sacred, sacred and plain.
"It is there, plainly, as any fruit."
This is powerful to me. I feel exposed and weak. Looking into a mirror that defines my wound with sharpness and clarity, causing me to feel.
Thanks man.
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