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Old 08-17-2019, 03:48 AM   #2
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Re: A Dream Within a Dream

I like this. Sometimes I find it difficult to keep up a rhyme scheme and still remain relevant to the topic or to continue to drive towards the original point.

Sometimes I try to stretch too hard and far to make them work. . . you've done it well here.

Thanks.
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