Level 7 - Loquacious
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: 901
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Re: A Dream Within a Dream
I like this. Sometimes I find it difficult to keep up a rhyme scheme and still remain relevant to the topic or to continue to drive towards the original point.
Sometimes I try to stretch too hard and far to make them work. . . you've done it well here.
Thanks.
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