Originally Posted by EyesOfAFallenAngel

Wow. I quite like this. I wasn't expecting a rhyming ending, but I think it worked out well with this.

The 3rd stanza struck me particularly...no sugar-coating, just blunt this is how it is. "Lips like a serrated edge" gave me a clear, interesting image.

Very good, Hoggy. :]
Makes me want to write again!