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Level 10 - Vehement
Join Date: May 2004
Location: California girl living in West Texas.
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Re: Angel
Wow. I quite like this. I wasn't expecting a rhyming ending, but I think it worked out well with this.
The 3rd stanza struck me particularly...no sugar-coating, just blunt this is how it is. "Lips like a serrated edge" gave me a clear, interesting image.
Very good, Hoggy. :]
Makes me want to write again!
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+1 Eoafa. end thread/ -Kelly
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