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Neill Fraser
05-24-2003, 04:59 AM
Looking for critics of a song I wrote tonite. Go to http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSnYVm2ZmE

Its called "Not For You". It was recorded with a computer mic so I realise the production is a bit weak, the vox are quite low in the mix - its a demo but good enough to get the idea across!
Please post any comments (good or bad!) in this thread.

- Neill
Neill Fraser
05-24-2003, 05:22 PM
Anyone: amended link:
http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSnYVm2ZmE
Dredg
05-25-2003, 08:38 AM
the song is generic (OPINION)

add in things to change it up alittle

if your acoustic is electric too plug it into a amp and put some delay on it....stuff like that

I figure your voice has an atmosphere kind of feel so why not add it to your guitar



it was an overall good preformance sounded, sounded good, however the song was campy (IN MY OPINION)

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