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Tralfamadore-83
04-09-2003, 08:15 AM
My anger could split the ocean
bring the sun down from the sky
crack the fuming air around you
splinters fall as you lie
fuck the worm inside your spirit
chewing it hollow until its end
instead of digging to rid the other
youve embraced it as a friend
sliding gently around inside you
poisoning and posing a little frame
thinking for you, controling your soul
as you speak your empty name
Even with what i sensed in you
I will not allow this trojan horse
Killing it as it tries to blind me
I have already chosen my course
i can see no more inside you
you have given up your own fight
and you are now the passenger
you are now the parasite.

smirk
04-10-2003, 09:11 PM
I like this one, way to question authority man. I like your descriptive metaphors like "crack the fuming air around you"

And yes, Kurt Vonnegut kicks ass

Tralfamadore-83
04-16-2003, 07:50 AM
sometimes its just hard to know who youre talking to, the corrupt ideas in a person, or the person themselves. somtimes theres realy nothing left.

Nassic
04-16-2003, 02:59 PM
Reminds me of H., vaguely.

A parasite corrupts a person so that the roles are reversed. The Trojan Horse analogy is teriffic. Nice and cyclic.

Tralfamadore-83
04-17-2003, 04:44 PM
im just sick of being a crutch for people that arent really my friends. im like a late night tv show, thats when im intereseting to them. whatever.... im getting bored